Category: writing
Poem: We’re Not Allowed To Have Nice Things

Leg o’ Mutton Sleeves
We’re Not Allowed To Have Nice Things
stop me
before i volunteer
again for tight rope walking
and twirling pistols in hot water
the lace from my bell skirt
catches the muzzle and pellets ping
underneath my leg-o-mutton sleeves
“perfect!” leaps from me like a Gatling gun
The s-bend corset digs in like trench warfare
the bust darts stiffen
with rigor mortis
incorruptible long
after favor has left my body
the flowing iron molding in my cheeks
flutter over the silver-grey mohair and gilt buttons
Mute is the only way to be
© 2017 Melissa Currence
This poem came from our Cincinnati East Poetry Meetup‘s prompt to write a poem that includes a phrase that you found interesting in your everyday life (like a line of copy from an ad, quote said by a friend, a phrase found in an email). I was most inspired by this post, Fashions of the 1890’s: Day Dress, on Vintage Victorian. See more about found poems from this prompt on Write Now Coach.
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Poem: Ocean as Inheritance

Atlantic Beach, NC. Self Portrait
Ocean as Inheritance
I see my mothers’ faces—
dozens along a single break
their braids crisscross my feet
their skirts ruffle at the shore
I am salty with their grace
their words confronting
my own hurricane—
a resurrection of waves.
© 2017 Melissa Currence
I spent a relaxing week with my writing friends at Atlantic Beach, North Carolina. Our gathering was jokingly referred as #poetforce, which I think it is a pretty cool name for a writing conference. We feasted on seafood, lounged on the beach and scared the waitstaff with our notebooks and long periods of silence. The Virginia poet Blanche Robinson Williams inspired this poem, so I’m including an example of her poetry below.

Scarlet Wing by Blanche Robinson Williams
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Poem: I am Dramatic
I am Dramatic
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Cincinnati East Poetry Meetup
I wanted to share that I started a Meetup.com group for poetry, Cincinnati East Poetry Meetup, where we workshop each other’s poetry.We listen and offer constructive feedback after the poet has read her or his work. And if we have time, we write together.
The prompt for our next meetup (from Kelli Russell Agodon – www.agodon.com – PDF): “Grab the closest book. Go to page 29. Write down 10 words that catch your eye. Use 7 of words in a poem. For extra credit, have 4 of them appear at the end of a line.We are a new group that shares our own poetry in an inclusive and supportive environment. At the end of each meetup, we will decide a prompt for the next meeting, for those who need it.”
We’ve held two workshops so far, which went great. We meet on the last Wednesdays of the month. Sign up to get workshop info and join our community (it’s FREE)!
Poem: Pristine
Pristine
When I was a girl
God willed the churches along the Elkhorn River
Stay pristine white
Coal dust never touching
Their clapboard
The road as close
as Eve’s snake
Now the steeples keep themselves clean
Rising above their abandoned sanctuaries
And crumbling tipples
Even God won’t stop
The combat of mountains exploding
And coal trains lurking past
Escaping with all the potential
© 2016 Melissa Currence
The prompt for this poem came from my good friend Kristi, who challenged our poetry group to be inspired by the poem fragments of the Russian poet Anna Akhmatova from the anthology of her work.
Here is Akhmatova’s line I chose:
And the road to the churchyard
Is a hundred times longer
Than it was when I carelessly
Wandered along it
This poem’s setting is McDowell County, West Virginia, which I was excited to visit in 2013. My grandma was born in Gary, WV. I loved both the Rocket Boys and Glass Castle books. In doing some research on this poem, I came across these great websites, if you’re interested in learning more:
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Guardian #8thDayChallenge
Guardian
With eyes closed, I am one
syllable. simple
as the first dawn
scattering a rainbow. a wingspan
just strong enough
to keep you
on my shoulder
© 2016 Melissa Currence
There was no prompt for this poem, but I like it for its simple language. Writing with less words makes each one more powerful. Using everyday language in poetry as been a writing goal of mine for several years. What are your writing “edicts”? I’d love to know!
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Happy Hour #8thDayChallenge
Happy Hour
the tumbler lowers
your smirk refracts
in the swirl between ice cubes
i, with darts in my fabrics
and hands without stone,
am creating a new happy
despite your confusion.
© 2016 Melissa Currence
Happy New Year! I took a small break for writing on the blog in December. But I’m happy to be back and ready to take on 2016.
My prompt for this poem was the quote by Eleanor Roosevelt: “No one can make you feel inferior without your consent.”
What are your writing goals for this year? Let me know! I am going to work on mine and share them with you soon.
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Here lies Octavia #8th Day Challenge
Here lies Octavia (1875-1888)
I breathe out the dandelion seeds
and roll in the hay bales
I push up the ryegrass
to grip their roots.
I run my scarred hands
in the thistle nests
and pat the ruts to keep them worn.
Dust rouges my cheeks
as I swing around the peeling tree trunks.
I’ve watched you
since the devil gripped my foot in the stirrup.
You have also absorbed death
between each sunset for a century.
I wish you could hear my song
and your laughter could
echo with mine,
that we still had a life
among these slaty hills.
Come now,
this is nowhere for the living.
© Melissa Currence 2015
This poem came together because of Halloween and listening to my mother’s stories about our family. She retold me the story of Octavia, who died when she was 13 years old after a horse riding accident. This picture is of her gravestone from 2013, 125 years after she died.
While the idea of the poem came together quickly, I worked on it for days. Since each word choice is so important in a poem, I can drive me crazy trying to search for the right one. I find if I am editing a poem a lot, I often have to look at the first draft to remember what I was trying to say.
What is your editing process? Let me know in the comments.
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Nora On Holiday #8thDayChallenge
Nora on Holiday
Her kitchen produced a thousand
tubs of mustard potato salad
and gallons of country gravy with
coffee splashed in for color.
She knew Elvis was the
best-looking man to ever
have lived and kept
an army of whatnots in arm’s reach.
The Sanka jar sat in the center
of the table for any
who happened to visit,
holding their mugs for tales
of Avon ladies, icy commutes
on inherited mountain roads,
Teamster meetings and the procedures
that cut things out of the family.
Curlers were rolled in
for Monday morning
but the house coat
set her free until
© Melissa Currence 2015
I’m still inspired by the “I am from…” poem prompt from George Ella Lyons. So I went in search of family poetry prompts and found a helpful post from Melissa Donovan on WritingForward.com. I saw the column for Grandparents and got inspired to write about my Grandma Nora, who passed away in 2011.
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Writing poetry about 9/11
With 14th anniversary of 9/11 having just passed, I’ve been working on my own poem about that time.
I first started by using the “found poem” technique and re-reading some emails I had kept from the day.
What strikes me now was the difficulty we had in referring to it. On that day, the event went untitled. We all know what we were talking about. Then we started to use phrases like “Our national tragedy” and “that horrible day” and even just “Ground Zero.”
Calling it “September 11” didn’t emerge until a few weeks later, at least how I remember it.
I decided to scrap my found poem, as it was a jumbled mess that didn’t mean much to me, and re-wrote it in a stronger point of view.
Before the Day Had a Name
I can only send you an email
to patch together some peace
after the phone call doesn’t go through,
so there wouldn’t just be hatred
to mask the sound of jet engines
and the 20th Century
pulverizing into
360 million pounds
of nothing.
I never lived through war before
so I cry during the morning news
I am trapped in a city
where the traffic is ordered
but the trauma stills needs to be raked through.
© Melissa Currence, 2015
I have written a few September 11 poems, and I’ve never been very happy with them. Share links to your 9/11 writing. I’d love to see them.
More Resources
- “Beyond Grief and Grievance: The poetry of 9/11 and its aftermath” (2011), an essay by Philip Metres
- “We Will Never Forget: 9/11 Writing Prompts” (2012) by Sylvia Ney
- “Ten Years of 9/11 Poems” (2011) by Robert Brewer